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Old 03-24-05, 09:16 PM   #14
Jason
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Personify
Alright Man You Had A Good Verse Here Nice Imagery Here, I Was Feeling The Vocabulary Here, It FLowed Well, Emotion Was Nice, And Your Structure Was Set Up Well Man, Through Out The Whole Verse You Stuck To The Topic And Never Changed Mata's In Here Nicely Done Man, This Guy Should Be Topical head Of The Month...10/10

Deception
Okay man Not Really A Good Verse, You Didn't Have No Structure On This One Bruh, Your Vocabulary Was Simple And Basic Not To Much Imagery Or Emotion Here, Meta's Add Some Here, To Make It More Intresting Man, And Also Up On Your Vocabulary Coz It's Geting Tired Man

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