nice shit.. deuce is a bitch... but you've elevated alot since i last peeped an open mic. or yours.. that structure is close to perfect and thats what you used to suck at, lol... i'd like it more if you ryhmed more than one word at the end of a line but thats just me, not alot of people care about that much anymore buts its all good... 7/10, you've elevated lots man.. alot of this open mic. shit has been suckin lately and its good to see a decent song in here...

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