Voted For: Drama Queen

aight this was a good topic...

Para- aight man... first of all ya lines were much to short.. lengthen those out dawg fa real... ya rhymes werent complex at all so u really need to up the vocab to a new level... i can see that you tried on this.. it wasnt the best but it wasnt bad... i think it was true life? either way imma say this wasnt ya best... i think you need to up on complexity and vocab and maybe think it out a little more... 5.5/10

DQ- aight i was blown away by this verse... this was godly.. so full of emotion it was almost like a movie was playing as i read it... the rhymes were great and the vocab was 100% dopeness... this was by far one of the best topical peices i have ever read on RV... you used immagry so well in this... you really know your topic... this was outstanding... blew me away...10/10 no lie... fuck those who say otherwise

Now Para i think youve got mad potential when it comes to topicals... but u need to up the complexity and vocab a lil bit and lengthen ya bars out more too...

DQ dont change a thing... that should be nominated for an RV award for topical of the the month and i think imma nominate it right now... was pure 300% dopeness.................

no hate but this is how i see this battle.....

Vote- DQ