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Voted For: Drama Queen
parallel-your verse was okay was not great kid, although you had some good imagery, it did not help out this verse, i thought this was one sided DQ had this one, your vocabulary was not good at all man, your structure was the only good part of your verse, and structure does not count for much these days, you need to add more emotion into your verse kid, in order to win battles like this personally i think you should elevate man
DQ-girl you had some good imagery, you also had some good vocabulary which i enjoyed reading in this verse, you structure was just as well as you opponent, you had good emotion in this here verse, i really enjoyed it, i think your one of the best, you had a more complex verse which enabled you to win this battle, it should be a KO but i don't know
/v DramaQueen................
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