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Old 03-25-05, 12:07 PM   #8
Wet Willy
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wow, ambient got this one, he came with some witty punches, the simpson line was nice, also i was definitely feeling the multi league line too....

Troop, your actually starting to get a grasp of basic punches, but they still arent hitting very hard yet... u had some forced rhymes and ur verse coulda read better...

so overall i give this one to ambient for wittier punches, and although structure wasnt real nice ur verse flowed nicely... V/Ambient..
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