Soundclick is being such a pussy right now... listening on lo-fi... cuz the mp3 is stopping half way through D/L... I wont comment on quality since Im not listenin to the fully mastered peice.... (after goin thru that, MP3 started playin)....

iight listenin while typin... quality is o.k, a couple of pops in it but overall I can hear most every word you say, dubs were a lil off in the second line of first bar, it does sound like the best you've dropped, that I've heard anyway. flow was more comfortable, you were consistent... you ride the beat o.k but your delivery is kinda rigid, try and relax a lil more with how you put it out, lyrics were good in most spots, all in all not a bad verse, still need some work puttin it out there but definately improving... keep droppin.1

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