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keloen
uh nice stucture, some good flow nice syllable count, the creativty coulda been upped a bit, but it wasnt that half bad decent punchlines, i was feeling them but i knwo you can do lot better, but keep doin ya thing, it was a good verse just not as hard, some decent personals as well. pz
Slob
stucutre wasnt as good, but the flow was good the syllable count was ight decent at most. but you had some nice punchlines in there and some really nice creativty some alright decent at most personals, but the creativty was really high up yo. keep doin ay thing pz
RTF in my battle vs Hammer
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