so far the beat is tight..
first verse - flow is pretty good.. lyrics are on and off.. some of the lines are pretty good.. some of em are kinda fillerish.. but overall i think you did pretty aight.. enunciation coud use some work, cause of what you were sayin i couldnt understand as well..but i mean, everyone has room to improve.. keep doin the joint.. i can only see it getting better mayne.. u doin ya thang.. i sayd decent drop playa

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