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Old 03-25-05, 04:47 PM   #20
Kawn Flixx
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hmmm PRetty Decent battle here.

Ima make a pros and Cons list like always

Slobk

Pros:
Your metas were pretty good.
wordplay was great.I rack line would catch ooo's offline
simlies were good.Like the Ill minds line was dope.
Flow was good also aint have to read it different or nothin.
Just read it smoothly throughout the whole thing.

Cons:
Nothin at alll really
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Pros:
wordplay
structure (except font)
closer
some of the punches

cons:flow was lil bit streched
the opener warn a brother is a slogan somewhere.
and I think its been used as a joke also.
So it ruined the originality of it.

So In my oppinion Slobk takes this one.

no need to return anything.Good battle,enjoyed it alot.
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