Voted For: Elementality

wordizzle....pretty gay battle here

dfunk...i see you improved from your last battle...but still needs alot of elevating....your lines and punches are too basic, they need more punch to em man, plus, everythin is either played or weak as hell "How many times have i already broken ya neck ? /
Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check" not a punch man....fake personal and its stupid....so, try to think of shit that will actually diss the guy, and make people laugh and go, ahah, he got owned, know what im talkin bout....because alot of your shit is just random fillers...it got ok at the end...but the fatality line has been done before

element....not bad...first verse here i see.....you gettin my vote because you actually hit with a punch...and a personal i think....so, basing of that........thats all really i have to base off....you can still elevate alot....because you had some potentials in there, but wordplay was kinda gay....so it ruined some....but you have nice stuff...just elevate....word

v/elementality

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