Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

shit........not that great of a battle

unregistered....had nothing good at all really...played shit to the max, i think your best line was
"You’re wack as fuck so read my verse and take notes
The only ways you’ll ever get a win is no shows and hate votes"
but still, it was stretched on second line, and its kinda played....had some good concepts, but wordplay was poor, nothing special with vocab...you need to elevate alot, nothing stood out here, and queer does not rhyme with diarrhea

lawless, need to work on structure and flow....spaces between lines is unneccessary....im givin you this because you threw some punches, weak or not, you attempted more complex and creative ones, and thats what counts.....none of you had personals, really, cept your closer lawless, it was decent....so, you still have a lot of room to elevate...vocab was good though....seems like you have the hang of things, just elevate......

v/lawless

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