Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

word...easy to decide here....

kid....coming out hard this time, you're improving alot, but your concepts are still really basic, and you gotta get a good idea of a punch...keep things consistent, keep dissin him all the way through, dont really talk bout one thing, then go off talkin bout eating corn on the cob.....also, you need to work on structure, had a mega stretched line in there....but you actually improved alot since before, but still have plenty of room to eleavte

slobk....dont know why you keep battlin these newbs, but whatever, you easily took this, for harder punches, and more of them connceted....strcuture wasnt consistent though, start of it seemed forced....still can elevate....word, one sided

v/slobk

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