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Old 03-26-05, 03:25 AM   #5
Parallel
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Voted For: Maximus Meridius

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that was weak, uh the stucture was good the syllable count was good, but your creativty lacked, your punchlines werent hitting and when you face a guy like Maximus your gonna need soem vocabulary cuz max always has somin up his sleeve. but work on ya stuff a bit 1

Maximus
Nice stucutre, nice flow good syllable count at most, but hat got me to vote for you was the creativty and the wordplay, the actual punchlines were hitting and you had some nice vocabulary, the personals werent really there but you had the wordplay and just way better verse overal. peace out
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