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Voted For: Copywrite 4000
umm you win plain and simple
DECREE, your strucuture was ebtter which made it alot easier to read, also you had better punchlines, your metaphores where kinda played and that MJ line was kinda played, LOL actually really played, all tho you had personals your slefglorified, like you would say somthing about him them self glorify your self, but decent spit, i dont lkie how you centered your spit tho, it kinda makes your strucutre look bad all thoguh it isnt....DFUNK you need to elevate, youve been here long enough just take the time to vote and read more battles also youg ot to freestyle out loud that is how you get better on punches, also it seemed as if you forced your verse, but good shit
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