Thread: A_M_H vs kesse
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Old 03-26-05, 09:00 AM   #52
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From: Durty Souf
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Voted For: A_M_H

AMH:
OK you had wordplay..but you rhymed with
only one sound. Which ruined the rhyming,but you
used all personals which you seem to be consistent with.
nice structure,but I don't give two fucks about that.

Kesse
You had no wordplay really.
Just insults, but you had meta's I'll give you that.
Fix your rhyme scheme and be more complex.
Add some personals in too.

Vote/AMH