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Old 03-26-05, 01:04 PM   #19
Kawn Flixx
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nice Open mic ...good use of vocab...
pretty nice topic you choose
Nice structure... you had lots of emotinos
and nice wordplay... good imagery
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The flow and rhythem was good and nice chorus
overall this was good open mic hope to see you again
...7.5/10
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