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Voted For: Indeph
Pretty decent battle here…
L.E. – you had a nice story there, good use of vocabulary, the flow was okay in there,
Structure was in place, like usual; practically your story had a little emotion up in there
Not as good as you’re other topical battles though, but pretty decent from you here…
Indeph – you also had a nice story too, the flow here was a little off & on, the structure
Was a little stretchy but it was in good use, your vocabulary was good too, & the emotion
Was good too, I thought you came weak here too, not as good as your other topical battles,
But good enough though…
Overall – both of you had good topical-verses but I think that Indeph came a little better in
This topical battle though, no hate to both though…
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