Voted For: Tstorm

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Tstorm
Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
......Nice Opener.......
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
..:: Nice ::..
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
...::: Nuttin specail Couldve said somethin hotta LOL :::...
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!
...::: Nice Closer :::...

...::: Overall :::...
You Did fairly Um all ya bars Had soem good contact except that one where you said somethin bout crunchin numbers?.....wasnt feelin that too much but overall you take this battle and you did good

Evolution
Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
..:: Nope, Lets Try agian ::..
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
..:: Not tryin to Hate but That Line .,.....Played ... Sorry ::..
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
..:: MAke a punch outta ya disses Mayne Itll Help You out Alot much more ::..
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s
..:: Nope ::..

..:: Overall ::..
I wasnt feelin ya verse to much you didnt have ANY punchez you jus made some disses and they didnt really have a good impact i think that you should atleast try to mix ya verse with metaphors and stuff bcuz that is what is lacked outta ya verse

My Vote - ..:: Tstorm ::..


.....:::: RTF Or I will get my vote taken outta this battle ::::....[/b]

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