Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

this was easy.....word

dazzle....you gotta get a ggood grasp of punchs man....your shit was basic and weak as hell, i think since you're new, you dont really know, so maybe check the tutorials or sump, cause your punches barely hit, most shit seemed like fillers or random sentances....not bad structure, flow, decent.....up vocab and wordplay though, that was weak....and clown donesn't rhyme with unknown....word, elevate, keep up yo

LM.....giving you this for having at least one decent punch land...you had some good shit in there, some wording was crap, and you really need to work on structure, keep it consistent man, make it look nice too so it can flow better, word....but i actually kinda laughed at some of your shit, was refreshing from some of the other battles ive read lately, so you seem to have a good grip on things, so keep elevating man, you'll do fine........word, RTF, if you could eh

v/lyricalmastermind.....for harder punches/personals.....no hate

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