aight...ima give u some real feed...ckuz some of these cats ridin ya dick...

lyrics...ya punches stood out...BUT ...some of them was played...the chorus...was kinda blah not the right effect....the bridge...same thing wrong effect...and like somebody said...the talkin...i can see if u repped Cali but it wasnt good to just talk about any ol thing ya feel me...thats not professional...to me that aint pro prolly is to u but its all good man...ya flow was good didnt really hear no slip ups...but the only thing that would make dis betta is if u didnt dub ya whole verse...if u just dub like ya rhymin words...or the puncheslines...it would make ya lines stand out even more...ckuz wit everthing dubbed all of it sounds blended...

stay up man...

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