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L.E
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada |
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Voted For: the kid 523
A'ight...I'ma keep this simple...
The Kid...you're few bars were a'ight...opener...meh...middle...blah...played...a nd your closer, you sorta dissed yourself....overall, okay flow, decent structure...elevation is good for everybody. Your problem is that you need to get more creative...work on that.
Wanadieannigga...You arent punching the kid directly. You are rapping about kids who clam they can rap...not THE kid...decent structure, flow was fucked because your structure was messed to shit...you also need to get more creative, and dont start new lines that continue from the last.
This battle was wacka s fuck...but The kid takes it for at least punching Wanadien directly.
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