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Old 03-27-05, 10:05 PM   #10
Parallel
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tstorm
well your stucutre was pretty good, yoru flow was pretty decent, but your personals you didnt have much. your wordplay (finishing lines) they just were not hitting at all. the punches overal just were weak, i wasnt feelign your drop at all yo. 1

Ev
uh nice stucutre mayn. good flow and a decent syllable count. but really i liked was the punchlines the finishing lines were good some nice wordplay. this was one sided by far. keep doing ya thing. hope to see some of ya battles in the future. peace

RTF is ya have enough psots. linsk in the sig
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