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Old 03-27-05, 10:26 PM   #15
LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: Parallel

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If ur a hammer then why aint ya hittin wit ya punch lines
I’m like a grizzly bear, yes, ill rip u up any god damn time
Ur a show off no wonder kids runnin ya a played myth
The only reason u gon switch is if u were a better Will Smith
Kid ya probably bad for ya bud, or didn’t you tell me u cry?
Take the “Hamm” bite the meat, I aint creating beef nor a lie
I’m reforming u, ya shaking like Bill Cosby in jello commercials
U beating me? it's like saying bill was with being controversial
U aint dropping hard, kid change ur name to teddy~bear
Like I was "Nailing" u to the side walk, u was already there

real good punches
u hit him wit da punches hard
great structure
great elevation
overall great verse-9.5/10

hammer


Right, let me see, kid thinks he’ll easily breeze thru me
I aint a windsock, il smoke and put him out like a doobie
Hes types himself up tough, misconstrue him as huge
This kids only 14 and wrecked more crews than Suge!! (He is an RV homewrecker)
Saying he sucks at text battling, but HE called me out
Quit bitching, want me to listen, heres a megaphone, try loud!
Kid been changing his name: “Xclusive” to Two By Four
Is it cos parallel’s “special” or thick like a wooden door? (Two by Four = Wood)
The only RV rapper who sucks as much as Parallel is Affinity
Oh wait…that’s his alias…….there goes his anal virginity (I just raped him hahaha)

like ur punches as well
sum lines were not that great- work on sum betta lines
good structure
nice disses
elevate a little more and u will have him beat
9/10

my v/ R.Flush
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