Voted For: mizz fyre

miss fyre
Of RV you want out, your mouth runs more than a tap
questions in your name asking Y DA L RAP?*
so wack, tried for 6, but still got no crew
LS says no, and CS just wouldn't "P.I.C" you
trash talking ladyrapper, talents somethin' she's missin'
says you ain't no topical head but still no good at dissin'
so listen fool, on this site you got more haters than ja rule
i serve you faster than waiters do...so keep your lyrical skills just for school

*her name backwards lady rap......Y DA L RAP

like all da punches
real good verse
easy2 read
good structure
jus elevate a little bit
real good 4 a gurl

8.5/10

lady rapper
sit bac & note diz, u think da "devil" wrote diz? "hell" naw itz GOD~SENT//
Ya juz mad cuz u prayed fo skillz & neva GOT~DEM

u musta been outa fuckin mind, musta been high//
callin me out bitch, i rock u 2 sleep cryin, and sing u a lullaby

Even in the dark, I'm still gon' shine u cant tell itz night//
miss fyre is lyk a VAMPIRE, she anit eva seen da LIGHT

ull neva recover, mah flow iz lyk AID's//
urz iz mo lyk a 24 hour bug, goes away in less den a day

on da mic i tear lil "misses" apart and im 2 cold fo em 2 feel me//
go crazy on em and lyrically smack dem bicthez silly

ur in da wrong place, im rollin in da upperclass section//
u startin 2 IRRITATE me lyk a mutha fuckin yeast INFECTION

I serve it 2 ya coward ass & bac hand ya lyk we playin a game of tennis//
Act lyk u want some of this and Ill give u da business

lyk bleach im leavin a perminate stain//
afta diz battle u anit leavin lookin da same

mah rhymez are lyk packed TEFLON//
grl if u hatin on me u mine az well give up cuz u anit "GUN" get long

Im da hottest bitch on diz board yet ima beginner//
u wack and anit bringin nuttin new 2 da "table" lyk ya "left ova dinner"

im da #1 Lady Rapper, ya jus a chicken head//
once dey read mah rhymez dey gun 4get wut YOU said

playin round wit fyre grl u gun get burnt, drop u on a POT//
let u fry lyk "baccon" cuz itz da only time u'll b SIZZLING HOT

bout 2 get chrushed by a fly chick//
i got sum "dirt on mah shoulderz" now bitch "brush it"

da only time shes good "ORALY" is when shes SUCKIN A DICK//
bitch stayz on her kneez, got bad dieseases, cuz she juz a piece a shit

lyk da idea of ur parentz keepin ya, u rappin wuz a mistake//
kinda lyk 9/11 u alwayz remember diz date

real long verse
not dat many punches
elevate more
work on structure
dont try and fit 2 many lyrics in 1 line

no hate 7/10

my v/miss fyre

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