Voted For: heat

heat
When I cock-spit, I get nauseous, n steam rise when I drop-shit
I slug-led, n my punches tug-dread, get ya blood-spread like bitches gossip

Punches lungin and missin, labeled advisory coz the tongue is explicit
warm up? u not even concider a Practice ,ya flow temperarly like hospitol visit

Keep ya provoking-slurs private; u wouldn’t be deaf if you stopped hearin my spoken-words
plus I need a THC patch to help prevent me from smoking-herbs

You crack-ho! Just "no show" you know-i-show-no-pitty!
I'll lay you flat on yo' CHEST like a HO-WIT'-NO-TITTIES!

these my throwaway bars..im Testin the Bastid,my Best is the Madness
but i bet ill still have em 'Facin Death' like Reflections in Caskets!

lotz of punches
like all da rhymin lyrics
great structure
good elevation
real nice verse
8.5/10

sabre
IP:


i set this shit up, but i didnt think you would accept your sonning
such a hurry to get battles going...this one you shoulda kept on running
your couldn't be adept in buzzin, if you had your text resting in hives
you could be jesus born again, but still wont be the next best thing alive
looking at your activity, dont know why your talking like you think youre big
straight up whack...you havnt even figured out how to put links in your sig
ya stink like a pig, hope youre hungry, cause im gunna be bacon up heat
after this you'll need a new pair of shoes...because your taking defeat

work on punches a lil bit more
sum punches aint land
iight structure
elevate sum more
no hate 7/10

my v/heat b/c of betta punches

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