Voted For: Young Blaze

young blaze
Youngs Born To Kill, Light Vs Heavy damn I Burn Ya Fat Mor Then A George Foremen-Grill/
Defining Ill Flows, Ima Allwayz Come Back To Hit This pussy Like Boomerang Dil-Dos/
Ill "pour in and score", put "four in your door" when my rhymes tore in to Show-gore/
u couldnt "turn tables", if u were "funkmaster flex"in a Furniture store/
This kids-a-threat? I'll dip-his-neck ,in his own scrpits-n-setz/
Dont shout-wit-bursts,Print-out-my-verse ,maybe then ud rip-my text/
ya chest left imprinted-with-heat, ur heart's skippin-a-beat/
so dope this bitch is in rehab tryna kick his addiction-to-me/
I'm written these lines to reside in ya eyes, u recyclin lines/
probably caught a CHIPPED TOOTH from BITIN those rhymes./
"Blazes the nicest"..thats what people be tellin me/
i must be sellin WEED...cuz this mothafucka kid just took L from ME/

liked ur punches
lotz of nice lyrics
good structure
iight elevation
8/10

kid 523
IP:


Ill leave Young Blaze paralyzed for days
Leave RV bitch this shit aint made for gays
How the fuck are you undefeated,
Blaze did good the first battle, now your just repeatin it
Battled 8 noobs, good job, you beat em all
You stepped up bitch, but for u its gonna be a hard fall
Im a rookie, but my flow is among the pros
Can't believe im battling .w this Light Weight ho
Act up bitch, ill hit you with my 9 millimeter
Ill take you on a tour, bitch call me your leader
When this battle is finally over, yo bitch dont pout,
I think i just made Young Blazes flame go out

not 2 many punches-work on dat
fix structure a lil bit
elevate sum more
only a few punches- more punches at opponent is needed
7/10
no hate kid523

my v/young blaze

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