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Old 03-28-05, 02:34 PM   #6
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Voted For: Kesse

this is an unbiased vote i read both for what they were and here is my honest opinion

Kesse- you had a nice verse . you had alot of good rhyming and personals ... your personals were on target the whole way through.. you played off his name and his motto which was a good move.overall your verse had alot of good struc..their is nothing really wrong with it from what i read your vocab was really good and you kept everything in line and on target... overall a very nice drop

armada- your verse was weak. i was expecting alot more i guess. you didn't really rhyme anything of yours. you sorta just smack talked. you dissed him yes. but half way through it it seems like you lost what you started with and just started ragging on canada. you need alot of work before you challenge someone like kesse i think . for starters i liked your structure but you didnt have any end rhyming words
Like in my "Canada" diss, leavin a million dead frogs
That Embarrassed of Canada ya cant rep it HUH!!??
I spit A diss then this verse, guess im prewritten huh?
Ima embarrass you, like the sox did the yankees
leave ya body broken, ship home to ya motha!!!!
A Canadian Slain in America is nuttin its only propa
Ya spittin a good verse, is mythotical like the race of Avians

if you notice in that verse you just sorta ragged on canadia it would have been an alright seconf half but you really didnt rhyme anything .... here is a suggestion before you drop say your verse outloud like your rapping ...it will help the overall finished product...no hate just elevate

Vote//Kesse... for actually rhyming and spitting disses kesse gets this ...
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