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IP:
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Lmao Marvjay Killed This Foo!He Had Some Decent Punches Every Punch He Had In It Wass Hot As A Matter Of Fact,Marvjay Ya Structure Fell Of At Some Points And You Had Some Mean Ass Wordplay With Multies To Go With It
Orion A Alias And You Know That Verse Wasn't Balanced Right.You Had A Couple Decent Punches Not All Them Was Decent Tho That Idol Lien Was Wack As Hell Man Your Verse Was Stretched,You Didn't Have Any Wordplay And Your Verse Didn't Have A Multies And Didn't Make Sence At Some Points
Openor-Marvjay,Good Punch
Punches,Marjay Had More
Personals-Orion,Had More Personals
Wordplay-Marv
Multies-Marv
Closer-None Marv,Would Of Took It But It Wasn't Worded Right
Overall Marv Took This Rtf
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