Voted For: Tstorm

evolution


Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s

not dat good of a verse
use more punches
enhance ur vocab
betta structure
6.5/10

t storm
Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!

liked sum of ur punches not 2 many punches doe
elevate sum more
work on vocab as well
overall better verse den evolution-no hate evolution
tstorm-7.5/10

my v/ tstorm

ay yall check out my hot battle vs. The kid 523
elaborate da battle and holla back wit a vote 4 da betta battler please

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