Voted For: GlocKoma

very close battle

glockoma
I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]...
Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick...
Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It...
Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static...
"Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It...
I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped...
Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped...
For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips...
You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips...

liked ur punches and word choice
good personals
iight structure
elevate a lil more
8/10

kesse


you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain
my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name
i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth
cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth

feelin ur punches as well
not as much personals doe
word on enhancin vocab
elevate so more
no hate 7/10

my v/ glockoma

ay yall check out ma battle verse the kid 523
i think i posted a nice verse
letz c what yal think
we need sum votes so leave good feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
holla back!

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