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Voted For: Elementality
meh, pretty easy to decide
Dazzle...
>This shit just too easy, ima snap-ya, cuz you aint no rapper
Your a skater bitch..jus look under your name...at ya avatar
-meh, doesn't rhyme...plus, who cares if he skates 3/10
>Step up to me,behave! ima kill you.... then piss on ya grave
Hope it drips through tha coffin n covers ya like a tidal wave
-uh...can piss do that? 4/10
>Yeah,u jus been slayed,your more played than a slut with aids!!
solo line here, played to shit though 2/5
>Its official,ya made a mistake n thought you were sumthin special,
You must be on another planet, like E.T.. your extra-terrestrial
-choppy ass flow, punch was weak 3/10
You went for a free win makin a thread callin out some "O.NEWBEE.O"
But your skills are non existant,like a blonde wit a college degree!
[b]-meh, decent, coulda been set up better, your best punch here 6/10
overall: 18/45.....uh, alot of your shit was very basic, weak, and a couple lines were played....no hate or anything cause i know you're new to this, but its the only way you will learn whats going down with your shit.....i think you have the right idea, you just lack creativity and guidance withyour punches.....i suggest the tutorials, because alot of your shit didn't really diss the other guy.......so, i say, just read up on some shit, and you should get the hang of it..and try throwing some shit everyone will laugh at too...but not bad, i've seen alot worse from newcomers though.....keep up dawg.....like your last line, that was your best cause you actually directed both lines to him, and made a driect diss. nah saying,,,,,,,pz
Elementality
>Introducing the man with no skill, no flow, and no thrills
His shits so boring it makes you wanna pop suicide-pills
-not bad, seen the concept before, but good wording 6/10
>Dazzle bores the hell outta me with his filthy whack jibberish
Wouldnt have style if you had a genie and it was your only wish
haha, one of your best lines, had me chuckling....8//10
>He couldnt flow if he was shot out from from a waterslide
Guy tries to be so original but just ends up being cast aside
-meh, good 1st line, 2nd was blah....5/10
>Hes got the edasity to be battling me, when he can't even talk
I'll be making you look like a trekkie on here named Mr.Spok
-meh, okay i guess....kinda weak 4/10
>Look at his record..... his first battle he got K.O.ed for a loss
You're runnin against windows 2005, when you're MS-DOS.
-haha, this one made me laugh too....good 7/10
overall: 30/50....aight man....looks like you're really gettin the hang of things, one of the better new cats out there, definately got some potential....although, nothing really special in the wordplay department, not too complex, but you are new so, that shit comes in time.....but your on a good start, you seem to have a good hold on what a punch is....personals could use some work though...but your finisher was pretty dope....keep up yo....
v/elementality
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