LOL,this was very interesting, i like your switchups in topic,but it still seemed to fit together, nice vocabulary, maybe you meant this to be a serious poem, but it had some funny moments, i related to a lot of this, meaning i understand some of the points you were trying to make here, nice job, keep dropping.1

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