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Old 03-28-05, 09:55 PM   #11
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From: Adanac
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Voted For: Limited Edition

aight, this wasn't close at all

garanteed....nothing really special in your verse...some shit you were saying was too random, like naming your crew, who cares?....and, it was pretty basic too, no real wordplay, not creative or complex punches....this, overall, was a very weak verse....maybe somethin for audio that you could spit quick or somethin, not that great of a text battle....flow was aight, structure, could be better....need ta elevate

limited....shit, you had some good stuff in there man....telephone line, made me laugh, same with your closer........but overall, you stayed consistent with your disses...didn't sway off track, actually threw some hard punches, personals were fire and really stood out in this one....rick james line was a bunk set up though....but overalll, solid verse man...oh, and opener was great too, haha, some funny shit in here, you owned him badly.......word

v/limited edish.....uh, yeah, rtf if you have time.....word
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