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Old 03-28-05, 11:40 PM   #10
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Voted For: final

word, ima go with final on this one

wicked, i thought the punches you threw were a little weak compared to some shit i've seen you throw...uh, and finals were a little more thought out and hit harder....i also thought you kinda over vocabed the first part of you're verse, it was kinda cool, but i dont think it was that effective, and you dind't really do it anymore in the rest of your verse......well, flow and structure were good......need to get more creative i think, and up the complexity a little more......not a bad drop, but final came harder

final, thought you had some funny shit in here, structure you really need to work on, its all over the place, haha, but it flowed aight, had some hard punches in there, nice personals.....you stayed consistent with dissin him, and you came pretty hard, 3rd bar was pretty whack thou, but the rest of your verse was pretty effective.......good play on his name, and nice finisher, good stuff man

v/final
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