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Old 03-28-05, 11:52 PM   #4
Dumb-D-Dumb
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From: your Mom
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yo yo...

your name is a poetry term, but man you just a clown/
ya your poetry is deep....burried six feet underground/*
you wanted 10 lines, because your afraid to do more/
I understand you there....cuz I could beat you in four/
ya name is 'stanza'? well it doesnt fit, ya structures wack/
you seperate ya lines...so how is ya poetic verses intact?/**
Luda in ya sig...dawg, is this guy your fuckin idol?/
Wit a role model like that...you lack talent so vital!/
man face it...you cant win this battle, broken hoe/
A loss a kick-in-the balls...this my lyrical Roshambo!/***

* Stanza is a term used in poetry

**stanza mean verses bein structered into poetic form.

**Roshambo means a giant kick in the nuts...watch South park
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