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Old 03-29-05, 08:48 AM   #100
Elementality
 
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This was feedback posted for Kesse

IP:

Kids a Bitch, he ducked me Twice
he wanna say I'm whack, but feedback proves he said I'm Nice
Voted on my Battles, tellin me i Killed the Flow
Apologizin cause he dick rode thinkin i didnt know
I dont even know this Ho, but he quick ta Hate
kid you stuck in the elevator, so how you gon Elevate?
U wanna see me?...I'll rip out ya eyes n stick em too ya Rear
So images of me Stompin that ass will always Reappear
I strike Fear into those who wanna test my Shine
you dont appeal ta Adults, we dont 'Respect-Your-Rhymes'
How many times i got tell this dumb fuck i aint Gay
I dont play, but the Cock bar Forum is this way >>
http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=244
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Link to the establishment forum hahaha

Explanations:
Opener
i called him out on two seperate occassions before he actually battled, an he always says i'm whack
next bar is about him voting on a battle of mind, which he dick rode, then when i caught him out he asked for the vote ta be changed an said some dumbshit like ''i didnt read the verses properly''...but he only said that because i said he dick rode


bucks putting on a magic show, so lets work out that confusion
he's already made his punches disappear, his verse is the illusion
you've lost the most on this site, but yet you still come back for more
finally got something true in your sig, your still on the first floor
but your elevator aint going no where, you've proved on many occasions
you plus battling equals _______, but you still havnt solved the equation
you talk as if you actually have some skills, but your wrong hoe
your constantly spitting out shit, so i had to put on a poncho
"RV's Freestyle King", HAH, everyone knows that aint at all true
if your as good as your claim, why'd you get kicked outta two crews
so, i'll end this between us, but i'll go out with a little class
dont know me? the names Kesse, dont forget it cause i just kicked your ass
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explans: got kicked outta jury and NOK...everthing else should be easy

First off...I gotta say....its pretty fucked how you both used the elevator analogy on the same battle....it was almost like a battle between 7 year olds :P "I know you are but what am I" hahah. Tricky.

opener=kesse takes it. Esc.. yours didnt have flow bro.
structure=kesse...more rythm.
personals= Tie
vocab=kesse: Esc - your shits kinda mono-syllabicish
punches= Kesse: Good hooks man, you came out swingin. got a couple of hehe's outta me too. Esc... pretty ok i guess, but it looks like kesse's shine is greater than yours today
overall=kesse
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