I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]...
eee...I dono, just nothing really special... seems like you're not trying hard enuff....yup/up/tie-up? 3/10 - ouch...
Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick...
Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It...
See now that was alright, but still too basic. - 5/10
Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static...
"Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It...
damn....i just dont get it? sorry man, maybe you're just too complex i dono? - 3.5/10
I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped...
Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped...
You didnt really tell us what you're name says... I mean it doesnt say spunn-popped at all.....??? Sorry man, still not gettin'r, mabe next line......... - 3/10
For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips...
You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips... - 4/10
Uhm - ok i spose... I think you can elevate if you tried a little bit harder? I Dono, sorry man = just not feelin this one. Better luck next time
*18.5/50.

you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums
6/10 - Kinda good I guess...nothin speshl
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
7/10 - Good punch
still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain
my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name
7/10 - Bringin out a lil' tech in yea
i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth
cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth - 8/10 that was a sucker punch...he didnt see that one comin...then again, its just to easy to rip on a name like that. Still good though.
*28/49 *
Good Drop kesse...I think you'll prolly take this one.

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