Voted For: CA$per

very sad ass battle bof verse were wack but heres my feedback

casper
yo u wanna step to casper,imma lyrical ghoste...
u get fukkin wit me dogg yer rymes ill be toast.....
this aint tha place for u to spit your jokes....
itsa rap battle,u laugh... i get provoked....
to break yer skull,wit these lyrical rymes...
youll be like 50,bout to get poped nine times...
exept you aint that rich,u just a broke ass bitch....
u bout to explode,my lines r like an ignition switch.....
u battled against stanza and u made me laugh....
cause im cleanin u up like tha maintenance staff...
thats about all i need,to take this fight home....
my werdz r like bulletz that grilled yer dome.......

sum punches
not many good punches
work on lyrics
work on personals structure ok
elevate sum more
5/10

dumb d dumb
i peeped one of ya battles, and this no contest lyrically/
you think you can win? but...........you just voted for me/
geeze, i don't even know why you bother to even post/
cuz you harmless....like fuckin Casper the friendly ghost/
man why did your mom give birth to you? I should hit her/
Because the hardest thing about you...is the baby in ya picture/
face it dogg...your only wackness is a partner to you/
you dont act tough at all...Stuey looks harder than you/
man I am done, this battle is done, you fuckin' homo/
You won once, never again...wait your win was a no-show.../

weak ass verse
barely any punches
too much mom and baby shit......datz gay
work on rhymin
get more personals
structure wuz iight
elevate a hell of a lot more
4/10
NO HATE 2 BOF YALL JUS A WEAK BATTLE

my v/ca$per

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