Voted For: SKAAL

very close battle no hate 2 either of yall
heres my feedback

skaal
I'm A Bout To Bless This Dude Wit Tight Lines On This Loose~beef
You Aint 'skriptz' You Is Crayon Skribbled On Loose~leaf
On Tha World~wide~web But You Aint Known On Two~streets
U Burgaler~turned~fed Like Martin On Blue~streak
Shake Ya Head All You Want Like Shots Don't Go Thru~cheeks
Too~weak At Ya Show They 'walkin Out' Like Slewed~feet
Words Burn Ya Chest This Is 8 Thousand Proof~speech
You'll Need Yao Mixed Wit Shaq And That's Just Half Of My True~reach..............

good personals
like sum of ur punches
elevate sum more
work on structure
sum lines were hard 2 undastand
7/10

skriptz
Break your teeth & lets all see who will be the one to get last laugh
He said there’s something up his crack...
.................................................. ....but that’s my foot in his ass
Only words your good at saying is: “I can own your ass you bastard”
But the only thing you’ve really been good at was being a coward
Pick this homo-slob up on his feet, & then knock his ass in the chin
SKAAL’s best line would be when he saw the battle & checked in
I see you have a couple of punches, but I’m still laughing at you
Cuz I had called some1 wack, but I was actually talking to you

not 2 many punches
iight personals
easy 2 read structure
elevate sum more
6.5/10

my v/ skaal

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holla back yall

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