Voted For: DAZZLE

meh....

retro...shit, only good line was your closer....everything else is played and done before man....gotta come up with some creative shit, plus everything was just a little too basic, didn't really have any personals in there either, so work on that....but positively, your flow was good, structure good...no multies......just need to work on gettin some good punches/creative ones, get personals, and elevate the vocab and wordplay a little....and you should be fine

dazzle....not bad man, good personals....thats what really separated you, and you had some good shit in there, first line coulda been better because it was an aight punch, but overall, i think you took this one, for a harder punch, and better personals......you tied probly in every other category....this was a basic battle, but still not that bad

v/dazzle

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