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Old 03-29-05, 01:50 PM   #10
Sik Wit It
 
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Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

your name is a poetry term, but man you just a clown/
ya your poetry is deep....burried six feet underground/*
decent
you wanted 10 lines, because your afraid to do more/
I understand you there....cuz I could beat you in four/
booooooo…nada
ya name is 'stanza'? well it doesnt fit, ya structures wack/
you seperate ya lines...so how is ya poetic verses intact?/**
whoa…nice
Luda in ya sig...dawg, is this guy your fuckin idol?/
Wit a role model like that...you lack talent so vital!/
lol…wow
man face it...you cant win this battle, broken hoe/
A loss a kick-in-the balls...this my lyrical Roshambo!/***
decent here


My rhymes *pack* punch like supermarket teens on picnics
But ya *flow* is off like automatic learners driving stick-shift
not feelin this 1
I set the marker for skill, like im in a Tourney~With~Flaws
U couldnt *Pass The Bar* if u were and Attorney~At~Law
okay, decent here
Im mentally~advanced, while ur experimentally~in~trance
My rhymes*shock u*like seeing a vampire in a glass
nada…
This *dickhead* covers his * face* like a latex~rubber
He claims to be str8 wen he fucks his same~sex~mother
okay…kinda good
ya rhymes BORIN, like MIMES WIT MIC's & ya rhyme skill less
You Make Dumb Dumbz Look Like the definition of illness
good

both had okay verses…but dumb dumb, took this one in my opinion tho
both had some wack bars, and some were good, but it seemed to me that
dumb boy, came harder all the way in this battle…no hate tho
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