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Voted For: KiNg SoLo
king solo~nice opener,continues to be strong throughout verse.. effective punches here with the name personals and the crew personals, witty disses like the bitch farmer bar, your closer was very good in this battle, again, very witty battle verse, like the bold
statement, ties everything together well, that was dope with what you did with "whored"...good job..
one step beyond~ i see where you tried to go with this verse,but it seemed you tried to jumble everything in at once to fit, i like your vocabulary, but your structure could use work,i like the "garbage,takin you out weekly line",some decent personals on his profile,but i feel you could have come stronger,with what you had to work with, overall good job both,but i felt king had the more creative verse of the two, so he gets my vote..1
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