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Old 03-29-05, 03:17 PM   #3
Triple_N
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Calam.....ya vocals was a tad low, sounds like u ain't master width...nice reverb on'em tho.....flow was good somewhat basic but it worked with this beat.....delivery was nice....it was laid-back an subtle but the emotion you were trying to convey came thru nicely......lyrics was worded nice but your delivery made your verse.......really all you needed was a more distinct flow change-up it was somewhat repetitive...or maybe you could of changed your tempo here an there...other than ya voclas be a lil low an ya flow being to consistent...good drop

Deadly.......yours a lil perplexing cuz uy were flowing on snare but it didn't seem to good wit this beat...I usually like ya delivery where u punch in certain words like when u say "I fucked up".....but it seemed outta place on this beat....the beat was too laidback for all that....I woulda liked to here u flow strait thru this one without the punchin words....an ya delivery was off too....it was good but not for this beat ya lyrics didn't match ya delivery..ya verse seemed to have a "I'm sorry" theme an u was spitting almost as if ya angry.....u shoulda softened that a bit.....u had cnage ups in ya flow tho so thta was nice....an ya usual pops was significantly down....jus u spit somewhat outta place.....but decent drop

Overall:.....Y'all choose a nice beat for this track....I liked the sample on the hook but maybe one of y'all should said something btw thoe big gaps btw the "love u" sample on the hook.....other than that this track was alrite jus needs some touching up.....7/10......1
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