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Old 03-29-05, 03:23 PM   #13
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: CA$per

Pretty weak battle Ca$per took this one easily ...

Dumb
Your verse was plain weak, your punchlines werent hitten hard...Personals= None... didnt like that ... Structure was Okay? could have been better next time dont end you lines w/ // because it makes it seem like a pause ..and not a verse that has flow...Feel me?... Overall keep it up .. or not... which everone lol... 5/10

Ca$per
Decent verse... your punchlines were okay some were hitten , some were just weak , structure was okay , same like dumb except you had better flow... Overall decent battle both can elevate alot... try working on personals and harder punchlines ..6.5/10

Overall vote- Ca$per
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