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Old 03-29-05, 03:37 PM   #14
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decree~damn, one of the better battle verses i've read today, thank you..nice opener,it was effective,usually michael lines are played,but you brought your own style to this punch, well said, LOL@ "cross dressers lost in translation", funny punchlines as well, this verse was strong throughout,good,effective closing bar, LOL@"bring ky jelly to a friction fight", very creative battle verse, well said and done...1
dfunk~decent opener, you had some good lines,but i dont think you came as strong as your oponent,although i liked your closer, some people won't understand your words,like bum a fag, and cigans...but you had your own style with your verse too, i just think decree came stronger, well put together and more creative, good job both..1
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