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Old 03-29-05, 03:37 PM   #17
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Voted For: Premanition

Metaman? Damn im still waitin on the evidence
No punches inserted so ‘explanations’ are irrelevant
hot opener!
Gud to grab attention, get the reader to engage
Man I literally wish ur shit wud jump up off the page
ok, cud've been better
Yeh I stage the event with true content for descent
In the shadows? Meta’s got a torch in that tent
decent. nice multi.
Yeh you flow like a river, like air from a fan
If the fan included a band round its fuckin fin span
average punch.
Its o.k, go borrow my verse, use that copy n paste
Cos this over so quik its seems ashame it go to waste
blah!! played concept!!


im an authority here i punish kids daily,
he's PRE-MAN so how he gon have da balls to face me?
nice attempt but didn't puul it off.
my lyrics hit hard break you down wit pounds of notes,
you bout to "go down easy" like bud ice down yo throat,
ok meta. decent line.
why dis chicken cross da road to get merked in a text battle?
this bitch is a joke his played punchlines aint laughable (lol),
blah! not feelin it.
you asked for a battle but i bet yo shits-pre-written,
yo favorite rapper drop a hot line in the last fifteen-minutes?
played concept!!
imma send-this bitch home cause imma menace like dennis,
you couldnt send hard shots if dis was a game of tennis!
not feelin it!!! sorry!!!

right yo...premanition beat meta out on everythin really. the only thing u tied on was structure and flow. prem came harder wit the personals and punches and was just a lot more consistent.

return the fave......links are in my siggy!!!!!!!!!
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