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Old 03-29-05, 03:48 PM   #18
fluidmoon
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Voted For: Kid*Kapone

good battle you two..
Kid~nice,strong opener to start this off,LOL@your 2nd bar, queer eye line...strong punchlines..lol @ "your sig is fabulous"..funny lines as well, your verse continues to flow well and your closer is strong and witty, overall good drop, great vocabulary used here too..1
lyrical~opener was ok, could have been better written.you had some decent lines, your punches were good, some,like all the capone lines seemed like filler, i liked the windy city line, that was witty, i saw where you were trying to go with this, i just dont think you were as creative overall, or came full force like your
oponent did, closer was good, but your whole verse wasnt tied together well, like it was all over the place, but good job overall you two..1
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