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Old 03-29-05, 04:13 PM   #10
Know-Gimix
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lyrics are real basic... production is kooky- probly mostly your mic, and a little too much volume on the dubs... Lyrics sound like your readin an average text verse, the flow is real ab ab, nothing to really make a listener want to listen to the track, im not hatin just tellin you what i hear. when you adlibed that cryin... and the mj shit... do that when you spit ur verse, just keep workin on spitting some witty, fluid, entertaining shit. keep droppin.. 1
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