iight, pleasantly surprised...

this wasn't bad for the most part, just needed a few things to make this a classic track... first off the hook is somethin Im really feeling, I like the rythym you picked up with it, lyrics are good, just seemed like you could have really made that great with a little more emphasis put into it. Verses are pretty good, just work on your pronounciation cuz you get lazy lips like me occassionally. Presence is o.k, I dunno if your just young, or maybe just need more experience spittin, but theres that edge thats missing, whether its a lack of energy, a developing voice, something, and thats the one thing I noticed... quality was pretty good throughout, all in all worth the listen, keep droppin.

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