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Old 03-29-05, 04:34 PM   #19
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Voted For: heat

1st off...not a good battle but heat gets my vote
Trans-no good punches, no structure, last couple of lines dont rhymes, not good at all-ELEVATE

heat- u did a little better, DONT GET BIG HEADED...tha only line that i liked was your closer...the michael jackson line was played but i laughed when i read you closer
nice way to go out wit a bang

overall- ya'll both need to work on personals and punches, no multis from neither of u, elevate on those folks and yall b str8
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